Friday, May 26, 2006

The Golden Touch

The day snuggled out of
night's embrace
and seeped into me,
as I stood dazed in the wild green..

One touch,
turned the earth around
to a golden sheen,
and gave life,
to the black humming bird
on the tree,
and to me.

O Midas,
how much,
you would envy,
the Sun.

8 comments:

Sanjitz said...

O Midas,
how much,
you would envy,
the Sun.
-------- best lines and a good analogy drawn.

Good work!!

DSK said...

Thanks Sanjit :-)

its me said...

YEAH..superb comparison..

DSK said...

Thank you Soumya

DSK said...

Thanks Phani..for appreciating..
:-)

Crazy said...

me at a loss of words..after reading so many b'ful creations....just one word..."SUPERB"
Keep the good work going....

DSK said...

Thanks Crazy..

I thought..u forgot visiting me here..Good to c u back after a long time.

Crazy said...

I used to visit...but padh ke commentless ho jati thi....:P